Mr Mackinnon's Holiday Recount: A Trip to Scotland
I hope you are all having a great holiday. Here is the next part of my holiday recount.
These are the skills I have highlighted in this piece of writing.
I can use subheadings to organise my ideas.
I can start sentences with adverbials which express time. (including use of subordination)
I can use co-ordination (e.g. or / and / but) and some subordination (e.g. when / if / that / because) to join clauses.
I can use adjectives to create expanded noun phrases